i wrote this about a month ago and i really like it. it's called you're gone. i'm still working on the guitar part . i'm not that great but hey perfect practice makes perfect. ha. anyway err i mean spamoni, here she is:
It’s like every time
I turn around
To look into your eyes
You’re gone.
I want this to last
But I don’t know how long
I can keep this up.
When you choose your friends
Over being with me
You talk to your parents
But they won’t see
You can’t go out
I can’t come over
You ask again, they say
Maybe when you’re older
It’s like every time
I turn around
To look into your eyes
You’re gone
Its ok baby
I understand
I just want you to
To hold my hand
I wish you were here
By my side.
I couldn’t forget you
Even if I tried
You’re on my mind
All of the time
And every time
I turn around
To look into your eyes
You’re gone
But maybe one day
Things will go along
And I will write
Us another song
And you will be here
Just like you should
You’ll say I love you
Like I knew you would
You can go out
And I can come over
You ask your parents
They say now that you’re older
So next time I go
And turn around
To look into your eyes
You won’t be gone
Baby please don’t be gone…
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If you ask real nice, and i'm feeling good, maybe i'll sing it for you. Maybe. =]
aww thats really good like im not kidding it seems more like a poem though! =) good job!! ;)
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